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Mollie’s Paul Jenning’s Story

Posted by mrwaller on December 17, 2009

The Talking Burger

There is a school and a new kid has just started he is called jimmy, when he first stepped in the dirty classroom a tall nasty boy came up to him and started bulling him so he ran of and strangely he turned up in the cafeteria. He might as well get a burger so he did.

He sits down on a seat what is very shiny but he’s about to eat his burger but suddenly it started talking to him and this is what the strange burger said “if you eat me watch what will happen” he thought that was very strange so he just walked of with it. But suddenly the bully (David) comes along and nicks the burger but it starts talking to him. Knowing him he would start to sell it thinking he can make loads of money and go in the news so the bully (David) goes into the busy town and starts trying to make some money but it did not work so he tried the news paper shop but that didn’t work either he thought to himself this is useless.

Meanwhile jimmy was walking home crying, his tears dripping from his t-shirt. Finally he reached home he opened the door it creaked. Mum called and said “darling tea”
Jimmy shouted “OK”
Ten minutes later he finished his tea and went to bed.

The next morning jimmy woke up and walked to school, when he got in school it was P.E. and they all got changed in the changing room so then they all got called out side but one of them did not come that was the bully(David) after P.E they all got changed again.

Then they went into class and the burger started talking to the bully (David) it said “I’m going to eat you” so it started to take bites he regretted this.

Did eat him or not?

2 Responses to “Mollie’s Paul Jenning’s Story”

  1. Sindy UNITED KINGDOM Says:

    exalent mollie
    from rosie

  2. mollie UNITED KINGDOM Says:

    that is amazing i love it

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