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Ellie’s Paul Jennings Story

Posted by mrwaller on December 17, 2009

THE BIG CHANGE!!!!

“Mum were is the loo” its down stairs in the basement .Thanks mum! Ok it must be down here some were aha found it. “Urur this is disgusting mum you need to clean up down here!” who is this I seek o yes the last boy who sat on me told me and he never came back here. Who said that? Me I said that jack! Who are you and were are you? My name is moo the loo and your sitting on me aaaaaaaaaa this cant be true mum help there’s talking loo in the bath room!!! “Its no use shouting for your mummy. Mum help help I told you it’s no use shouting any way you’re already in a dimensional world witch means that your not in your own world any more your stuck with……. Your stuck with dirty Tom he’s the meanest bully in the new school you are going to in a few weeks time they will be a boxing and he will beat you up so if you want to survive then you will need to pick up a potion I can not tell you any more enjoy hahahahahahahaahahah!!!!

What happened were the heck am I this is like a sewer. Yuk it stinks. Lookerly jack found a small clothes peg that he cept on his nose for the rest of the time that he was stuck in this mad stinking sewer. Eventually a strange man appeared “ what you doing round here” I…I…I “NO I DON’T WANT I TELL ME WHAT ARE YOU DOING ROUND HERE!” well I sat on this toilet then it started to talk to me “ok keep going then” suddenly it told me about this boy who had sat on him and had never returned home then he told me I was in a dimensional world and that there was a bully in the dimensional world and I would met him at my new school in a few weeks time and they would be a boxing mach and he would beat me up so I had to pick up a potion and after that he said he could not tell me any more . “ Right well the good thing is that I know a guy who sells potions he can help you” thanks mate don’t thank to me why why can’t I say thanks to you you helped me you told me were to go to find the potion . ye I did but I am dirty tom .

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa get away from me jack tried to run away but his leg was trapped in a bar gate aaaaaa blood started to pour out. To bad jack I’ve got that potion that you need and you’re not going to get it. no any nooooo stop I need that you won’t get away with this I don’t know how but I am going to get that potion. I feel a bit sleepy (snoring). What the heck were I hay iam back home ye o ye o ye o ye I am HOME!!!! Hi honey hi mom what’s for tea for tea we have your favorite what you mean ham and pineapple pizza no I mean salmon Yuk I hate salmon WHAT BUT SALMON IS YOUR FAVORITE!!! No its not!!! I am leaving ok be back for 9.00. I need to get away from here. I know I will go to the ally way next to dirty tom’s friend’s potions shop then at the same time I can go and get the potion I am full off good ideas today for some reason. Jack leaped onto the balcony and tied a rope to a hevy block then he climbed down the rope I am in finaly jack surched for the poition found it suddenly something happened he got sucked back into the toilet he was home the next day it was the boxing match he drank the poition and nocked dirty tom he had won !!!!!!!!!!

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One Response to “Ellie’s Paul Jennings Story”

  1.   Sindy Says:

    WELL DONE ELLIE ITS AMAZING REALY IT IS

    FROM ROSIE!!!!

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