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Dan’s Paul Jennings Story

Posted by mrwaller on December 17, 2009

One day there were two kids who were always spying on a house across the road. They were two best friends who would be none stopping looking through a telescope. But one day a fat kid was playing with his ball when it suddenly went over into the house across the road “NO” he shouted “why did it have to go in the monster house” “sorry pal it’s gone for ever ““but cant you go and get it” “no” “please cj” “fine I will do it”. So off he crept into the monster house garden he ran and got the ball suddenly the house owner came out “GET OFF GET OFF MY LAWN” “SORRY” but just then cj made a hole in his lawn the house owner try’s to strangle him and faints then the ambulance comes . “Do you no what happened to him” said the paramedic person. “CJ that man was scary don’t you think” “no he just wants us to be safe” cj replied to the fat boy. The next morning the doorbell rang “hello who’s there” CJ said. Still no answer “stupid prank callers “BOO” shouted a little girl “AGHHH” screamed CJ “what do you want you pesky girl. “Trick or treat” “what I never thought it was Halloween.” “Anyway do you want us to kill that monster house over there” “ok I will” so they met up a week later. They were all loaded up with water guns. How are we going to get in CJ the door is locked. When he tried to murder me the door key came out his hand so I picked it up”. “Ok let’s do this” so CJ put the key in the door and turned. It clicks and the door swung open. So of they went in the house all they could hear was a tummy rumbling. Suddenly the house comes alive “aghh” shouted the fat kid. They ran out as fast as they could go. Just then the angry monster house owner comes home “what have you done to her she would never be so angry” suddenly it comes out of the grass. “Run for your lives you three” “no were not going without you. They ran down the street with a house chasing them they all ran to a construction site CJ and the girl climbed up the ladder on the crane they got to the top and the girl gave CJ some explosives and some rope and she tied the rope to the crane and to CJ. And then she gave him a big kiss and then she pushed him and CJ put the explosives on the house and the house explodes.

3 Responses to “Dan’s Paul Jennings Story”

  1. Sindy UNITED KINGDOM Says:

    COOL STORY
    BY ROSIE

  2. Theo Says:

    I liked the bit when they went in to the monster house with water guns it was a bit funny

  3. Adam plaskitt UNITED KINGDOM Says:

    It is realy good

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